Mnemosyne
Mnemosyne
is goddess of memory; also mother of the Muses. The centred layout
neatly captures the shape so appropriate to the poem: it becomes
literally the ‘hour-sifter’. It’s a poem in which both sound and
visual imagery attract. The first stanza reminded me of a shadow moon
in a summer sky—thoughts of the night alive in daylight. And then
the second stanza, which mirrors the first in every sense, is in
darkness—the memory which interferes with sleep, which keeps
smouldering thoughts alight. I like the sounds which run through–silver,
sister, sifter, sleeper, maker, ember-keeper. They build up softly
and beautifully, like sand sifting through the hour glass.
Helena Nelson